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Touch – Start From Me Fo It Now(?)
What is touch
Like an old song Memory sings,
Touch me
If you touch me
You'll understand what happiness is
(其实这个地方我想说接触,触摸,但是很蹩脚)
We have been touched many times in our lives. I was often touched by my parents and many other people when I was a baby. They touched me because they loved me and they felt happy when they touched me.
(这时我想把感动的意思表达出来。被电影里的英雄感动,这个例子好像不好。)
The first time in my memory I was touched was when I watched a typical movie about war that bad guy was killed and our people got saved. I cried. I loved our people and they through the movie touched my heart.
(这个地方我就想把接触,把爱,把感动交织在一起)
Just like the teenagers and young guys, tehy do not care too much about others, I did not touch other people for many years. Until that day my first baby arrived, I touched her, and I was touched. Touch came back, and at that moment I know what happiness was. I felt happy, because of love.
(其实,这里可以用很多修饰,比如排比,比如“I felt happy”可以加很多vivic修饰词表达怎么个happy法,比方无以伦比的happy等,俺功底太差,大家帮我吧。)
Touch is good, but we do not have enough.
(下边我想讲几个日常生活里常见的人们之间熟视无睹的,其实是漠不关心的例子)
New comers do not know how to cook Canadian food. My daughter is in grade 5 now, but I still do not know whether the lunch we make for her looks strange or not. she seldom complained but occasionally she said that our way making food was weird. Other kids never put tuna fish and ham in one sandwich, that is way disgusting. She likes burgers, then finally we made burgers, she eat a lot, but one day I heard from her that no other kid brought burger to school.
I need somebody to touch me and explain me and teach me how to cook Canadian food.
Seniors in senior centre are bored. We should go there and talk to them or have a small party, or even to setuo a daycare in each and every senior centre, so they do not feel lonely. By doing that, kids, their parents and seniors mix together, they have opportunity to tough each other.
(下边这些内容也应该比较容易用排比啊,押韵啊,头韵啊等手法,可惜俺不会,俺想跟你学)
Who need money but do not have enough? Young parents! Their career just get started, they need to pay mortgage for car and house. They need money NOW for everything but 20 years later when the kids can make money, mortgage get paid off, and their salaries increased, they will have a lot of money buy they do not feel the need of much money anymore. They can loan today when they are young but they have fears as they do not know how much in the future they can make. So young parents are usually thrifty.
Touch them by giving them a used Halloween costume, used blade, clothes…
Give some young colleagues a lift on your way home.
Volunteer at school or in community
Help understand cultures
Great Touch
Talking about culture, I recalled the 29th Olympics, the opening ceremony is so fascinating, embedded a lot of Chinese culture. I was touched. It was a window they know Chinese culture. Like the theme song sings, You and Me, From One World, We are Family. We touch each other, we can live with harmony without war. The war movie ever touched me but now it still touches me in the sense I hope there is no war.
The American big movies touched me by the scenes like shooting, killing but now it touches me in the sense that I want no killing.
Touches that We can Do
Back to our daily lives, our community, we can touch people. I got touched by you guys here from the first day I joined. All of you talked to me even you know I might not be able to respond because sometimes I do not quite get you. but you touch me, that encouraged me.
As time goes by, people may have conflicts, retouch is necessary, show you care you love. Can you touch people surrounding you?
We might go to school and open a toastmaster session for kids. Or go to the senior centres and open a session there.
We can ask each other how are you. by how are you I mean I want to know how are you without disguise. Share your headache, your trouble, your happy.
Let’s tough. From your hand, you heart, I know you were beautiful then, you had happiness, and I am happy and I hope you are happy by touching me.
I love you.
(后半部分就是列出些要点,还不知道怎么进展,怎么取舍)
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Touch – Start From Me Fo It Now(?)
What is touch
Like an old song Memory sings,
Touch me
If you touch me
You'll understand what happiness is
(其实这个地方我想说接触,触摸,但是很蹩脚)
We have been touched many times in our lives. I was often touched by my parents and many other people when I was a baby. They touched me because they loved me and they felt happy when they touched me.
(这时我想把感动的意思表达出来。被电影里的英雄感动,这个例子好像不好。)
The first time in my memory I was touched was when I watched a typical movie about war that bad guy was killed and our people got saved. I cried. I loved our people and they through the movie touched my heart.
(这个地方我就想把接触,把爱,把感动交织在一起)
Just like the teenagers and young guys, tehy do not care too much about others, I did not touch other people for many years. Until that day my first baby arrived, I touched her, and I was touched. Touch came back, and at that moment I know what happiness was. I felt happy, because of love.
(其实,这里可以用很多修饰,比如排比,比如“I felt happy”可以加很多vivic修饰词表达怎么个happy法,比方无以伦比的happy等,俺功底太差,大家帮我吧。)
Touch is good, but we do not have enough.
(下边我想讲几个日常生活里常见的人们之间熟视无睹的,其实是漠不关心的例子)
New comers do not know how to cook Canadian food. My daughter is in grade 5 now, but I still do not know whether the lunch we make for her looks strange or not. she seldom complained but occasionally she said that our way making food was weird. Other kids never put tuna fish and ham in one sandwich, that is way disgusting. She likes burgers, then finally we made burgers, she eat a lot, but one day I heard from her that no other kid brought burger to school.
I need somebody to touch me and explain me and teach me how to cook Canadian food.
Seniors in senior centre are bored. We should go there and talk to them or have a small party, or even to setuo a daycare in each and every senior centre, so they do not feel lonely. By doing that, kids, their parents and seniors mix together, they have opportunity to tough each other.
(下边这些内容也应该比较容易用排比啊,押韵啊,头韵啊等手法,可惜俺不会,俺想跟你学)
Who need money but do not have enough? Young parents! Their career just get started, they need to pay mortgage for car and house. They need money NOW for everything but 20 years later when the kids can make money, mortgage get paid off, and their salaries increased, they will have a lot of money buy they do not feel the need of much money anymore. They can loan today when they are young but they have fears as they do not know how much in the future they can make. So young parents are usually thrifty.
Touch them by giving them a used Halloween costume, used blade, clothes…
Give some young colleagues a lift on your way home.
Volunteer at school or in community
Help understand cultures
Great Touch
Talking about culture, I recalled the 29th Olympics, the opening ceremony is so fascinating, embedded a lot of Chinese culture. I was touched. It was a window they know Chinese culture. Like the theme song sings, You and Me, From One World, We are Family. We touch each other, we can live with harmony without war. The war movie ever touched me but now it still touches me in the sense I hope there is no war.
The American big movies touched me by the scenes like shooting, killing but now it touches me in the sense that I want no killing.
Touches that We can Do
Back to our daily lives, our community, we can touch people. I got touched by you guys here from the first day I joined. All of you talked to me even you know I might not be able to respond because sometimes I do not quite get you. but you touch me, that encouraged me.
As time goes by, people may have conflicts, retouch is necessary, show you care you love. Can you touch people surrounding you?
We might go to school and open a toastmaster session for kids. Or go to the senior centres and open a session there.
We can ask each other how are you. by how are you I mean I want to know how are you without disguise. Share your headache, your trouble, your happy.
Let’s tough. From your hand, you heart, I know you were beautiful then, you had happiness, and I am happy and I hope you are happy by touching me.
I love you.
(后半部分就是列出些要点,还不知道怎么进展,怎么取舍)
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