你这么谦虚,我提一条。发音好了后,要把重点放在断句和关键词。你这一段,几个地方有这个问题。比如 depend on 之后,his son 之前,顿一下较好;lived,more and more,rural,move,drew 可以读更清楚一些。另外,in a community,in 和 a 要连读,disadvantage 吃了d。
-wincity(戒书的红卫兵);
2011-2-24(#6527884@0)
His intonation is way off that makes the overall reading strange.
-thornthorn(Holy Moly);
2011-2-24(#6527907@0)
too critical
-mikesmith(老猫);
2011-2-24(#6527937@0)