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工作学习 / English / 再帖两首英文短诗（非己之作），请高手指点迷津
-tulipa(tulip);
2003-5-8
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怎么没人理睬了？真的需要帮助……
-tulipa(tulip);
2003-5-8
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I thought it is just for fun, it turns out that some serious work is involved as well :-)For the first one, you can get some idea from http://www.english.uiuc.edu/maps/poets/s_z/williams/wheelbarrow.htm. For the second one... Let's stop here. If we go too far, we are missing the essence of learning. Have fun!
-shaomiao(shaomiao);
2003-5-9
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红轮小车白色鸡群 边上
一辆 红轮小车
雨水冲刷 更显鲜亮
难得她 弱小身躯
竟也能 承担如此重量
-shaomiao(shaomiao);
2003-5-9
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太阳看啊 太阳张开翅膀
覆盖大地 驱散黑暗
好象 一株大树
植根天堂
枝蔓 向大地生长
-shaomiao(shaomiao);
2003-5-9
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想象一下卖烤白薯的大哥。
-pmer(pmer);
2003-5-8
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哈哈哈，果然妙极。不过好像是烤鸡肉串的？:P
-pingle(窗前花下);
2003-5-8
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我说说第二首，个人意见，仅供参考。首先想象一下一棵颠倒的树，它的树根向上，树支向下，延伸到四面八方；同此，太阳也是在空中，展开翅膀驱散黑暗，也是延伸的意思。这样你能理解吗？
-qqixin(qixin);
2003-5-9
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