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工作学习 / English / 不知道这个办法能否行？让大家帮我REVIEW。请改进并说明理由，大家才好学习，谢谢了。 -losthorizen(Shangri-La); 2006-2-3 {1307} (#2760380@0)

不懂你这个专业，所以具体的建议给不出来。但是一般这类科技文章都是用比较客观的口气叙述，不要用那么多主观陈述。 -diao_david(GBTS); 2006-2-3 (#2760393@0)

Good point. Let me axe all these craps. Just for discussion, I do have something like that before. The reason is I always write something which I think it's purely my idea. -losthorizen(Shangri-La); 2006-2-3 {1366} (#2760585@0)

just for your entertainment -nathalie(玉友); 2006-2-3 {1266} (#2760561@0)

Oh, man, your English is perfect. I just axed as following, but now I really don't know if I should keep it. -losthorizen(Shangri-La); 2006-2-3 {670} (#2760626@0)

Combine you two guys' advice, here is the final one. Thanks a lot. -losthorizen(Shangri-La); 2006-2-3 {750} (#2760648@0)
Very good start. Here is the second section. I believe I can learn a lot from you guys. My English is always a pain in my ass. -losthorizen(Shangri-La); 2006-2-3 {1806} (#2760819@0)
Section 2.2 -losthorizen(Shangri-La); 2006-2-3 {1002} (#2761011@0)

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