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工作学习 / 外语学习 / Doctors, patient in. Please comment on the following paragraph.So I took that pink, screaming baby in my arms. Bounced her on my hip to get the gas moving and it didn't take two minutes fore Baby Girl stopped her crying, got to smiling up at me like she do. But Miss Leefolt, she don't pick up her own baby for the rest a the day. I seen plenty a womens get the baby blues after they done birthing. I reckon I thought that's what it was.
-nothanks(ciel);
2012-2-20
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1.Sounds like a nurse or nursing aide's memo 2. There're some obvious grammar errors that did not prevent readers from grasping the main idea3. The writer does seem to have some room for improvement in writting skills to meet basic workplace requirement
-oiseau(月舞飞天);
2012-2-22
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Guess I owe you some context information.
-nothanks(ciel);
2012-3-1
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very interesting(genuinly:)) ! thanks a lot for sharing even if you already said"nothanks"~~My understanding is that this remains non-standard English since the sheer fact that it's from a book doesn't justify it's correctness. But you are right that it is indeed one of those mind-openners.~
-oiseau(月舞飞天);
2012-3-2
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+1 to 1st sentence. +0 (or -1) to 2nd.
-wincity(红卫兵);
2012-3-2
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the main idea is clear, the patient get blue.
-james123456(Father w/ 2 sons);
2012-3-1
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