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工作学习 / 外语学习 / 要写一篇比较重要的ESSAY用于申请学校，请推荐一ESSAY辅导高手， 谢谢。
-halifax99(halifax);
2012-12-18
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艾瑞克，酱油哥，担心姐
-mikesmith(老猫);
2012-12-18
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老猫
-tyra(Zara);
2012-12-18
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同呼唤.
-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-12-18
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我那三脚猫的语法,被人说成是walking xxx,还是别来现丑了,回头再耽误了真需要帮助的人.
-mikesmith(老猫);
2012-12-18
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即时写作老猫绝对第一, 不用吭吭哧哧的费劲.
-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-12-18
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那是科八股,写了10年了,不算
-mikesmith(老猫);
2012-12-18
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As long as your RFP generates sales then it counts.
-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-12-18
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老猫生气啦？俺不过是跟刺哥抬杠，老实说你的英文写作很不错。
-wincity(红卫兵);
2012-12-18
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哪能呢..我写的确实不错
-mikesmith(老猫);
2012-12-18
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都不错
-tyra(Zara);
2012-12-18
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起码比你强.
-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-12-18
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Sorry Laomao! I was not referring to you particularly. Please forgive a naughty girl!:-)
-goingconern(GoingConcern);
2012-12-19
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Naughty girl, ha ha ha, my goddess, 看看吧，学夹生了的典型，语法是没错，内在意思和思维十分别扭和可乐。除了 naughty 用 forgive 也seems to much
-dv2011(小肥羊);
2012-12-19
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Your English level is nowhere near hers. I thought she gave your a good suggestion not long ago.
-winterstorm(打酱油的);
2012-12-19
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肥哥要谦虚谨慎。
-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-12-19
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是啊，他说goingconcern“可乐”，那不等于说自己是“雪碧”吗？
-winterstorm(打酱油的);
2012-12-19
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Please read my post one more time because I don't think you get it. She does make less mistakes than me in writing, but I don't think she always has better senses than mine, especially in this case.
-dv2011(小肥羊);
2012-12-19
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your first sentence is a typical Chinglish, and for your second sentence, you wrote she gave "your" a good suggestion. Ha Ha Ha. Very interesting.
-dv2011(小肥羊);
2012-12-19
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should be “too much”。
-wincity(红卫兵);
2012-12-19
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thx
-dv2011(小肥羊);
2012-12-19
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肥哥很谦虚谨慎。 -thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$); 12.19 16:05 (#7963168@0)
-wincity(红卫兵);
2012-12-20
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No problem..I guess I know who you were referring to...
-mikesmith(老猫);
2012-12-19
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刺哥，兵哥
-tyra(Zara);
2012-12-18
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兵哥是肯定的. 我吗, 只要不怕错误百出.
-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-12-18
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俺只怕错误比你的更多，而且还不以为耻。
-wincity(红卫兵);
2012-12-18
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同呼唤.
-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-12-18
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俺是真心真切的需要，俺真着急呢。文章题材是告诉我们应该录取你的理由。有没有谁写过类似题材的文章而且比较成功，真心请教。哦，多谢各位的参与
-halifax99(halifax);
2012-12-19
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不晓得你申请什么样的学校, 做个参考吧.
-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-12-19
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首先你得自己努力写，每个人目标不同，情况也不一样，不要盼望模仿别人的样板。然后可以请大家看看。
-goingconern(GoingConcern);
2012-12-19
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俺真的需要帮忙
-halifax99(halifax);
2012-12-19
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你可以去掉个人信息,把essay放上来,尤其是担心姐,是个行家,让大家提提建议,会有帮助的.
-mikesmith(老猫);
2012-12-19
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但是文中涉及好多个人信息呀'不便放网上，知道好心人想帮而且非常感谢，想找个高手辅导，付费
-halifax99(halifax);
2012-12-20
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友情呼唤，酱油果果。。。
-redjunk(rolia);
2012-12-18
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同呼唤.
-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-12-18
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你是说酱油果果可帮上？
-halifax99(halifax);
2012-12-19
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赶脚吧，你在这里求助，几乎就是自杀行为。
-redjunk(rolia);
2012-12-18
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给你个灵课, 自己搞呗, 没那么难吗.
-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-12-18
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谢谢
-halifax99(halifax);
2012-12-19
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谢谢好心人！坛子里的热心人多：）
-halifax99(halifax);
2012-12-19
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It comes with a price, for 500 bucks, I will do it during holiday spare time.
-dv2011(小肥羊);
2012-12-18
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Well Made. Well Priced.Well Dressed. Moores.
-thornthorn($oOHoly MolyOo$);
2012-12-18
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500圆？好像有点贵哦，
-halifax99(halifax);
2012-12-19
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自己写，如果在高中，请学校英文课的老师帮忙修改，如果在大学，请大学英文系的tutor帮忙修改
-222123(123);
2012-12-19
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想网友帮忙我看你只能自己写，然后隐去个人信息发出来，大家可以帮你改改语法措辞等，你自己对其真实性负责。
-winterstorm(打酱油的);
2012-12-19
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这个好
-tyra(Zara);
2012-12-19
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