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工作学习 / 外语学习 / 请有空的前辈给看看这些句子有没有语法错误,非常感谢. 1,I am writing to express my interest as an Office Receptionist with your clinic, as advertised on the website.
-hank73(happymom);
2014-2-5
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2I am proficient in using of general office equipment, computer software (MS Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Outlook, Access).
-hank73(happymom);
2014-2-5
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proficient in using of 去掉of， office equipment and computer software加个and
-sallay(sallay);
2014-2-5
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3My previous related reception experience and exceptional organizational and problem solving skills would enable me to perform my duties effectively.
-hank73(happymom);
2014-2-5
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and exceptional organizational是什么？
-sallay(sallay);
2014-2-5
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exceptional organizational skills
-wincity(红卫兵);
2014-2-6
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perform my duties efficiently好一些
-sallay(sallay);
2014-2-5
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effectively 也可以，意思不一样
-wincity(红卫兵);
2014-2-6
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4Overall, my proficiency in office software and customer care as well as my multitasking skills make me a suitable candidate for this position.
-hank73(happymom);
2014-2-5
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5If would be my pleasure to learn more about your needs and discuss how my skills could be an asset to your business.
-hank73(happymom);
2014-2-5
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这一句开头应该用 if would be还是 it would be呢?
-hank73(happymom);
2014-2-6
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It would be
-sallay(sallay);
2014-2-6
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因为正要发简历,现在在线有好心人帮个忙吗?在线等.再谢!
-hank73(happymom);
2014-2-5
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整体而言，你喜欢用长句子，一句话说几个意思。把长句子拆成短句子，一句话一个意思更好。
-wincity(红卫兵);
2014-2-6
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my interest as an Office Receptionist =》 my interest in the position of an Office Receptionist 或者 in the Office Receptionist position
-wincity(红卫兵);
2014-2-6
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感谢以上所有热心人的帮忙,谢谢!
-hank73(happymom);
2014-2-6
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刚刚又做了点更改，请帮忙看看吧。谢了！My exceptional organizational and problem solving skills as developed through my experience as a student support staff at Yorkwoods Public School would enable me to perform my duties efficiently. Overall, my my strong work ethic and customer care as well as my multitasking skills make me a suitable candidate for this position.
-hank73(happymom);
2014-2-6
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as developed through去掉as
-sallay(sallay);
2014-2-7
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又是简历问题，招聘广告上没提供地址，只有公司名字，cover letter 的抬头怎么写啊？这样写行吗？Date
XX Inc.
ATTN: Human Resource Manager
RE: XX position
-hank73(happymom);
2014-2-10
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有人知道吗？
-hank73(happymom);
2014-2-11
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随便找个样本照着写就行了。这种小事无关紧要。
-wincity(红卫兵);
2014-2-11
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样本就是有写地址。但是雇主没贴地址。就空着吧。
-hank73(happymom);
2014-2-11
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图书馆，有resume, cover letter, interview 的书，多了去了。在图书馆呆上半天，抄，复印，拍照（？），找到最好的借回家，都随你。
-looksee(qiaoqiao);
2014-2-21
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