Topic: I have five years of accounting related experience working with A/R, A/P and payroll. 请问这句话有错吗？先谢了。 @美国华人论坛:美国枫下论坛 The Rolia Forum of USA

工作学习 / 外语学习 / I have five years of accounting related experience working with A/R, A/P and payroll. 请问这句话有错吗？先谢了。 -hank73(happymom); 2014-2-26 (#8626556@0)

第二句： My excellent knowledge of general office equipment, computer and accounting software such as Accpac, QuickBooks and Simply Accounting make me a valuable addition to your company. -hank73(happymom); 2014-2-26 (#8626565@0)

简历还是求职信？ -redneck(Cracker); 2014-2-26 (#8626619@0)
" I have xx years working experience with Accpac, QuickBooks and Simply Accounting and know how to perform tasks such as xxx, xxx, and xxx. " - will this be better? -mikesmith(老猫); 2014-2-26 (#8626632@0)
I possess comprehensive knowledge and experience many accounting software such as Accpac, QuickBooks and Simply Accounting. I am proficient in office administration and skilled in technologies. (CONTINUED BELOW) -meisuowei(.); 2014-2-26 (#8626654@0)

I appreciate your consideration of me for employment and look forward to hearing from you. -meisuowei(.); 2014-2-26 (#8626655@0)

I have five years of accounting related experience working with A/R, A/P and payroll . -- Bookkeeping experience for five years in AR, AP and Payroll. -meisuowei(.); 2014-2-26 (#8626638@0)
rolia热心人真多，谢谢大家，我干脆把整遍cover letter 贴出来吧，欢迎大家的意见。 -hank73(happymom); 2014-2-26 {1260} (#8626692@0)

COVER LETTER 怎样，并不能从根本改变雇主的决定。你的 RESUME 里面的内容是核心。我们都是移民，英语上不用精益求精。把意思表达清楚是目的。可能有些词不准确。但是苛求准确，可能提高的只是 10%。我个人意见，你前面写的可以了。把精力放在 RESUME 和 SEARCH 上吧。 -meisuowei(.); 2014-2-26 (#8626861@0)

另：写得很有礼貌。向你学习。Through my experience as an office support volunteer at Yorkwoods Public School, I have demonstrated -- By working as an office support volunteer at Yorkwoods Public School, I have demonstrated 唯一可能需要改的地方。 -meisuowei(.); 2014-2-26 (#8626873@0)

谢谢指教。我改为：Through my experience working as an office support volunteer at... -hank73(happymom); 2014-2-26 (#8626941@0)

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